Beyond the editorial "We," which represents the staff of a publication, you might also want to use the sense of "we" to include the reader in your argument. Often, you can do this by bringing up points on which the majority of the audience would agree.
Using your own sample argument, use inclusion to relate to the reader by commenting below.
Example: Certainly we all want what is best for our bodies while at the same time we want what is best for the world. But in this case, what is best for our bodies is what is best for the world.
Using your own sample argument, use inclusion to relate to the reader by commenting below.
We all want to lower health insurance as well as good health care. But no. We don't want good, we want better. Heath insurance is a very important part of our health care. If we can not afford it then its not as helpful. What is best, always has a chance to get better.
ReplyDeleteCertainly we all want to be healthy and not dead. But in this pandemic of Swine Flu, being healthy and not dead might be hard if we don't take immediate action.
ReplyDeleteAll we want is what is best for the country. But in this situation, swine flu is easily preventable, which will help the people living here.
ReplyDeleteObviously, we all want to lead safe healthy lives. And if the answer to that is health care, we definitely need to make it available to everyone.
ReplyDeleteCertainly we all want to have the feeling of being safe while driving in our cars or sitting as passengers. But with texters on the roads, this dream will not be realized
ReplyDeleteEfficiency isn't a bad thing and neither is convenience, but taking some time out to just slow down isn't a bad thing either.
ReplyDeleteCertainly we want to avoid death or excruciating pain, but the swine flu is not the situation that calls for this type of fear.
ReplyDeleteWe can all agree quite easily that pollution and global warming are important concerns in society today--both are also problems that involve the environment and the air we breathe. In the same way, tobacco smoke drifting in the air until it is breathed in by some unknowing citizen is a concern to the environment and the air we breathe in--more so even!
ReplyDeleteDrug abuse hurts you and everyone around you. What's best for you is best for the rest of the world as well.
ReplyDeleteWe want to retain old traditional and remind students to value the privilege the use of computers. We don't want to lose all that hard work. The dependency of technology needs to be cut down.
ReplyDeleteI'm sure we all want students to excel at school, and what's best for them during these stressful weeks is a chance to take a break.
ReplyDeleteWe all agree on the fact that the swine flu can be dangerous, but we should all realize that there are more pressing things to worry about.
ReplyDeleteWe all want what is best for the world, and clearly, using plastic bags is not a wise choice that helps us preserve the environment.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to be successful and live the best life we can. Although, different people have different perceptions of this and as respectful human beings, we should allow different people to live their lives to their values.
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ReplyDeleteCertainly we want to help rebuild a nation destroyed by it's ruler and provide safety. But helping won't solve all of the world's problems. We should also learn to help ourselves while protecting the world from others.
We all want to be in a clean environment, well we are at school for eight hours out of our day. We need to watch out for our surroundings and take initiative to fix the mistakes of others.
ReplyDeleteThe library is something that should be available to everyone, however busy their schedules are. By increasing the amount of time the library is open, more and more students will be able to use its facilities and resources.
ReplyDeleteOf course, we all want teachers to like, or at least not hate us. However, we must accomplish this task through performing our best in what the teachers are supposed to evaluate us in, academics.
ReplyDeleteWe all want what is best for our future, and our future is dependent on our education. Teachers need to utilize more technology to expand our education, and thus expand our horizons for the future.
ReplyDeleteLike everyone else, we all want control. Control to ride a horse, being CEO or just control of you own life. Every single person want something that they control. School can be overwhelming, so the student find that being competitive and getting into a good college means they have control of there life and there future. That we as society, are not spinning out of control.
ReplyDeleteAfter all, who would want for their grade to suffer because of someone else's lack of responsibility in their studying? No one should be punished for not preventing something that they couldn't have prevented.
ReplyDeleteWhen we are fully rested, and our mind is focused we do better in school. And students doing better in school, in return, iis what our school needs. So having Monta Vista begin later in the morning would actually be helping MV itself.
ReplyDeleteEven if we don't particularly enjoy school, we all want to avoid detention. By changing the late start schedule, we can reduce traffic congestion. That will reduce the number of our tardies, keeping us safe from detention.
ReplyDeleteWe all want the best possible image of ourselves to shine through to others. Leaders are the image of our society, and what we strongly believe in should always shine through in the actions of the leader.
ReplyDeleteCertainly, we all have the right to live healthy lives. Some of us are wealthier than others, but our differences in wealth should not determine whether we have more access to health care, a basic right that all of us should have.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, we recognize that not all telemarketers are scammers. However, we do not believe it is right for a total stranger to be contacting a person on their private phone line.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to secure the future and safety of both ourselves and our children. But at the same time we both want the freedom of decision, the risks of taking a leap out of your safety zone, and the exhilaration that comes with such risks. It's the right that we hold as human beings, that no one, not even parents, should be able to hold back
ReplyDeleteWe all do care about the newer generation of students in America, but we need to unite and fight for a cause that has been overlooked for too long.
ReplyDeleteObviously we always want what is best for oneself and one's family. But not only does it benefit to one in general but also the world and other countries.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to be responsible humans. We all want to be looked up to. If we don't start helping this disaster, we won't be remembered as respectable humans, we will be remembered as destroying monsters.
ReplyDeleteIf we all simply put the environment above ourselves just that one time, then we would have a solid foundation for future, even more impacting steps towards helping the environment.
ReplyDeleteCertainly, we all want success to come to us. But, we must remember that we cannot always be perfect, and others must get a fair chance. In this case, our failure may bring another's success, and another's failure may bring our own success.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to look our best. It is important for us to feel like we look the best to our ability but we should also understand that looking the best is not the most important thing. We should all first be concerned about the kind of person we are. If you feel your best, you will look your best.
ReplyDeleteWe all want our loved ones to stay with us for a long time and will do anything to have this. But since everyone feels this way, we should work together to encourage diabetes awareness.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to be individuals, so why not let our student and children what they really want to do?
ReplyDeleteWe should all try to eat something nutritional. Even if we do this only once in a while, it will be better than never.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to keep in mind the thoughts and feelings of students. Even though it may not seem like it, but students and the youth of high schools are some of the most deeply effected in this economic crisis.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to live in a world of peace, but we must take initiative to make that happen. We must stop any threats to our homes, to our society.
ReplyDeleteWe all want to have a say in how our lives are run and telling the youth to vote can be the first step. We need to encourage government participation so that the United States remains open to everyone and no group feels left out.
ReplyDeleteEven though we might not know any of these children at all, we still know that they are out there, living in fear while we sleep peacefully at night. After we propose this law, we will be able to sleep in PURE peace, knowing that everyone is safer.
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